2) My favorite bands are Green Day and Busker Busker. On my iPod Touch 4th Generation, I have almost every single album of Green Day, such as American Idiot, 21st Century Breakdown, Nimrod, Bullet in a Bible and Dookie. Also, I have every single song from Busker Busker. Interestingly, Green Day and Busker Busker are very different from each other in many ways.
2) My favorite football club is Manchester City, also known as Man City. This year is probably the happiest year for both the club and I because we won the Premier League, and it is out first league title for forty-four years. My favorite player in Man City is Darren Fletcher, whose position is middle field. I am 100% sure Man City will do well next year and hopefully win the League. Superbia in Praelia! (FYI it is the Man City's slogan, which mean 'Pride in Battle')
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ReplyDeleteI can tell which one is a lie because I know that Darren Fletcher is a player in ManU.
You have a very good grammer overall. To point out a mistake,
This year is probably the happiest year for both the club and I because we won the Premier League, and it is out first league title for forty-four years.
should be changed to
This year is probably the happiest year for the culb and me because we won the Premier League, and iti is our first league title for forty-four years.
Also from your next posting, it would be better if you can write in 5 paragraphs format, with a introduction and a conclusion.
Keep up the good work!